reflecting thinkin points

I like my piece becaussee it has everythinng that's its supposed to have in it. the commerciall has three claimmms. Alsooo its has a slogann and a logoo. Lastly it is hass  a Celebrity appeal. i feel i amm good at persuading the audience. i thinkk my teams commerciall is goinng to persuade little kids to gett a pillow pet. Another thing that i feel i'm good at is memoriziingg.  I feel thatt i did a good jobb memorizinng what i had to memorize for the commercial. One more thing thatt i feel i'm good at is fitting the part. i dressed appropriatly to fit the part if a kidd that getting a friend to buyy a pillow pet. some area were i can improve  are looking at the camera more instead of facin away from it. I could alsoo talk a little louder and clearer. Persuasive writing techniques i could try  next time are having more claims and more things on why to buy this product. another one is that we could've dressed the part of a famous person to look like theyy really have a pillow pet. The part of the process i most enjoyed was creating th commercial and presenting it. i like it because all the other groups gett to see how you interpret the idea of the commercial. The goals i have for next time are to have its practiced more so i could gett it perfect. the three things i learned about mysellf throughout the process are thattt i am capable of doinng things. i cann do anything i want if i tryy. Also i learned thatt i have the ability to create a commercial. Last, I lerned that making a commerciall is not an easy taskk it is difficult but sometimes you have to make it.