Thursday, April 28, 2011

BITHDAYY SUPRISE !!

          " Mike wake up ! We have to figure out what were doing today. " Jesse shouted.
          " I have an idea of what we can do... We can get a birthday present for Gabriella's sweet 16 birthday. " Mike replied enthusiastically.
          " Good idea we should go ask dad now." She jumped up and said.
          They both sprinted up the long tiring steps and rushed to there dad's work room.
          " Dad can you bring us to the mall to buy Gabriella a birthday presents please please please." Mike and Jesse bugged their dad.
          " Sure go in the car and I'll be there in a second. " He answered.
          They rushed down the steps and they went to the key rack to get the car keys, and they ran out the door. They hopped into their dad's black 2012 Camarro. They buckled their seatbelts as their dad comes into the car. They drove to the mall which was two minutes away.
          " Dad thanks for bringing us can you pick us up in a little while. " Jesse asked.
          " Ok be good. "He  replied. t
They walked around and they found a store called Delias ® They walked in and right away they saw a beautiful dress that was standing out. The dress had flowers and it was purple and black. They went up to the cashier and bought the dress.
          " Excuse me you don't have enough money you are $20 short. " The cashier said.
It must've been their lucky day on the floor in the middle of the empty store layed a $20 bill.
          " We have the money." Jesse said.
They bought the dress and their dad pulled up outside. They went home and they were to excited about the present they gave it to their sister a day early.
         " Here Gabriella we got you a birthday present. "  They both said together.
         " thnak you ! i'm going to go try it on. "
She comes walking down the stairs in the beautiful dress and she twirled around and danced in the dress.
         " I absolutly love this dress ! thankss! i appreciate it. " Gabriella exclaimed.

1 comment:

  1. Good job Deana! I lliked your post. You stuck to one topic but you messed up some words. You did instead of I you did i and instead of thanks you did thankss. Besides that your post was good.

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